This was an interesting battle...
Copy, I felt like you did alright, I see your verse as a cop-out
nothing wrong with that, you must be running low on fuel at the moment
which I kind of called this past week I believe, still you do what you do best
you continuously search for ways to alter the whole vibe you give off
which is fine, it worked with the quote as is, I also thought of doing the same kind of verse
matter of fact I did but as a different alternative that works for me..
I suggest you do the same next week, I'm quite sure you are in seeding...
dead, your verse suited you very well as well, you threw in that old touch
and you extended your verse, which I noticed with Copy's a little after I saw yours
I am not sure if you two agreed on this before the battle but i feel unaware regardless
enough about that, your piece was well written to your strengths so it gave you an edge
you always seem to be on point when it matters, at which point you just flowed effortlessly
nice work
v/deadman, he came with a stronger piece and came more prepared on his subject
which makes the piece more worth the read as I finished, nice work
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