Nice battle here.
zygote: Terrific story as always. The piece captured a heavenly scenery in my mind and it never let up. A smooth read as well as your mechanics were top notch once again. The hidden meanings in the lines were very nice as well proving that this just wasn't some "religion" piece, but it was instead a religion piece lol. Nice piece here zy.
Mike Wrecka: I gotta be honest with you I really enjoyed your verse this week Mike. Terrific story of love between a husband of wife finding heaven here on earth. Your rhyming was impeccable as it is every week but the only bad thing I see about this is the piece is too short imo. I think with a longer piece you could have had a better chance of beating zy this week, as what you wrote was beautiful but wasn't enough.
Overall I gotta go with zy on this one. Great battle though guys.
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