[Cereal_Killa]

Zygote:

All I read so far is the title.. love it.. swwweeett just fin verse and dope.. colourful, pleasant and peaceful.. The damn vine why he be fucken with that mega pine lol.. hey man this oober cute ima get my mum to read it she will dig it.. I think story extremely advanced storytelling this is one of those topics where you need to have one hard line.. one bad boy that knocks everyones head out the park, and to do it in the bright format is tough but I know for a fact you are capable of it.. I truthfully think that lacked.. just as far as putting the nail in the coffin with your readers.. None the less an outstanding, OUTSTANDING display of written work here.. and I truly did enjoy the read.. thank you..

Mike:

Hey I like this, sort of a respect sight on love you would read at your wedding.. or mates wedding.. structure was cool, vocab was nice as far as nothing seemed forced.. all flow was nice and it was a genuine heartfelt piece.. sweet drop mate

Vote = zygote

I look for story, the best told story.. And Zygote has this ish locked down.. Tight match overall and enjoyed the read.. cheers blokes n g/l