Adonis:
I love when you twist shit up.. I mean you never drop a traditional twist when you’re coming at a verse with a message, that is outside your everyday belief.. what you do, is what all great writers do.. you put your personal feelings and alter them to fit this new belief whole heartily.. And it shows, you defiantly became this character proud of their dark nature, they need to feed off it to survive.. I love that.. I think we all have this inside of us but you came at this like you've purged out "complete conviction".. it was beautiful.. Oh yeh the wording Woahuh, shit I was highlighting lines to quote in this vote but then by the end I was flooding the post :)
Fav line though:
“I may have black balled my wife, maybe mumbled hate crimes”
It was kinda cute but badarse at the same time..
Red:
Oh man this was tight.. The fallen angel still had the strength to reach the stars.. Tis was oober cool.. What your best at is your subtle references that tell the real story underneath the mask, which I love.. completely.. Your structure high tech and your vocab strong.. Umm intro ok look buddy :) so lacing each broken bar with the internal emotion of the character was insane.. I aint even gonna play on that.. and the flip on how pessmistict he is during the conflict.. and then once the conclusion hit there was 100% proof of his optimism.. COOOWWLL dude loves it..
Vote = red glare
Man this battle was fucken insane.. my mind was swaying who to vote for, so I had to really knuckle down n dig deep for your verses.. Its like Adonis has a poetic verse with a natural voice that speaks direct to you of his pain.. where red has a multi layered story of epic proportions.. And this as is every match up to opinion but got dang it is tough.. Red Glare straight up I will always sway in the end to something where the longer I look at it the more layers I peel back.. so I went the redman.. crazy arse match.. I need a smoke.. g/l guys
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