nm fuck it I got time
ok
for starters
I like you both so ion wanna hear no shit you fgts
Des
u vote for ur other site pals like its ur job, im voting for ur voting boycott
dudes thinkin RB so much, ving rhames barely beat him out for the voice spots
ok opener. creative but nothing extraordinary. just ok
cats say, 'des? he a bull.' cuz i might rip u in half bitch
if they ever say amiable, its cuz ur a polite little faggot
(cool wordplay)
i'll scar and beat u while i breathe deep - i'm dark and evil
& noxious gassed up in here, but still remains far from lethal
pretty cool nameplay
u talk hard but you'd choke in the drug game u wack bitch
u should watch The Wire... cross in front of ur eyes before u slip into blackness
(eh..seen similar punches but not with that show as a reference but thought u were going somewhere else w/ this ..not feeling tbh)
scared to go pics, but u post selfies in chat threads... full of men, dude
guess u dont want cats to take whacks at em, unless its in the privacy of their own bedroom
(ok close)
pretty consistent verse. only one I wasn't feeling at all was the wire. the rest varied from ok/cool
Everyone's pulled your card, bitch & I know this verse'll bruise ya',
Fuck punches; I'll give Dest' a knee to the face w/ out having to read his worthless future.
(I think this is a played nameplay if im not mistaken..but I haven't seen it personally. wording carried this tho. liked it)
You're cursed to lose, bruh cuz dudes wack w/ the bars clown,
Des puts so much heart & soul in to verses then cry's like a faggot after he's stomped out.
(lol)
Broke lame... Listen; w/ text you need to retire & stop the shit,
Cuz when it comes to his Cash flow, it's biting his bars for a cypher accomplishment.
(yikes..even if it isn't true..its resonant in my mind solely because of allen knight...gotta admit the bars were similar but ion think your a biter but we as battlers are supposed to exploit things like this.. lotb thus far)
Save the pic battle fuckin' geek, you'll get crushed indeed,
A pictures worth a thousand words, while yours will provide Allen & Sharp w/ the top punches of the week.
(eh)
He'll get touched, quick dawg your weak, trash your shit,
Cuz the pen names fitting, considering you destroy every concept that you flip.
(ok)
relatively close one. but amen went for the throat.. Ill be honest I was expecting des to come a bit stronger considering the animosity but his opener was on some creative shit..wasn't harsh at all just clever..the rest of his verse was similar ..clever but nothing that made me go damn.
amen on the other hand fucking was mad as hell when he wrote some of his lines..in particular the cash one. lmfao that was just ferocious.
close one but if im being honest here and I always am. I gotz to give this to Amen
stay writing fellas
v/Amen
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Last edited by El Muffin; 01-02-2015 at 11:55 PM.
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