[Adonis]

apologies for quick vote as you should know it's not my norm.

Zy - To me bro, this shit read as crisp as ever. I can't lie, I think this might have been the smoothest read for me EVER; and I've read a lot. The meaning was deep to me, as I was once extremely religous I immediately connected this to the 3 seeds parable. I will say that the verse did connect with the topic, but only after I pondered it. Your saying that christianity took the long road, and is now the leading world religion. As I don't like the connection, feel there was better routes, I absolutely loved the execution.


Mike - seemed abrupt, like just ended in the middle of the verse. I see the route you went, and like ZY not the biggest fan. I mean not a bad route, but I don't get the raw emotion of love from reading this verse which in my opinion was your main focus. Great flow in the first two bars or so, after that it was bad, but was no where near as crisp as the opener

All in all, a decent battle, but to me zy had the more complete verse, with better writing

v/ ZY