[Adonis]

Quick Vote sorry, lack of time but I "Have to Vote" so...

Nigma - Felt rushed, some wording issues here and there, begining 4 lines I didn't enjoy flow. Never did understand who the person is, but I did read 3 times all in depth and consideration. Wording's biggest issue..."Saw the God's watch us walking on and evolve to Nazi's"...Change of tense or something put this off. All in all I know you are much better then this and have the skills to basically out write this verse ten times over. Might come off as hate and sorry, but that's all I got.


Xces - Story of war, and very indepth with the leaders and the games they play. Loved some lines wording, the imagery was nice as well. Didn't like the fact you added the link, to me it cheapens the effect of the line. Yes, I would have missed the reference, yet still...

All in all a decent battle, one went with a inner look at ones self, the other was more outward however still had that philosophical look with wars leaders and added some quotables spread throughout

Vote -xces