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Old 12-31-2014, 04:03 AM   #2
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Idk how nobody has commented this yet. It was completely solid. Rhymes on point, easy flowing read. You sound like you do a lot of people-watching. And a bar is a perfect place to do it, FORREAL. Laughed out loud at the "goddammit, the bitch" line. Loved how you got more and more personal and of course the twist at the end. Good shit man. We needa collab again soon. You get my creative juices flowing
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