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Old 12-28-2014, 03:35 AM   #12
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Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth
U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth
Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder
1-2 League's like your Childhood
Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together
BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait
Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape

Muff's verse wasn't amazing or anything, but it was more than enough. Spoke, you seem to have the concept of wordplay and metaphors down, but you need to work on that wording/delivery. Right now, there's just too much going on and your lines are difficult to follow and lack a punch. Keep at it.

V/ Muff
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