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Old 12-27-2014, 02:57 PM   #5
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this was cute, it tugged at the strings hanging from my sack
I take that back...it tugs at the vitals of skill that we all lack
a moment to reflect and see how human nature makes us act
that...is what makes this piece natural, but when we reach 'bad'
& carry on from there, it seems like you stumbled but didn't care
you rounded it off though..to be fair, these pieces are rare...
you don't see anything like this and that...is a breath of fresh air
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