Made me think of Immortal Technique listening to it. You could put *insert da circle member here* to that middle verse. Visually it was well constructed, loved how many syllables you incorporated into the rhyme while staying on point.
I'll admit, not a fan of this line though.
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HAHAHA Hashtag backtocelibacy!! You lack the relevancy
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It was a little gimmicky, and # in my opinion doesn't belong in a song. While I like the squishedtogetherwords conceptually they aren't repeated to continue.
Still, that was super dope, and I loved the "mirror-effect" across the page. It felt like a poem, and after all, that is what rap is supposed to be: Poetry over music.