Garner/Wilson concept was good.
Vs
Quick shots was a good concept but didn't really like your execution. Boarding experience was cool but the execution could have been harsher.
I think Mimic took this with just a more effective verse overall but Story is definitely improving. I think if he could really think his concepts through and execute them harshly, he'd be straight. He struggles w/ executions, as I've stated previously.
V/Mimic
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