Tic Tac
Opener had potential but fell flat for me. Muff'll was a miss. White House had potential as well but the wording/execution was soft. Genocide thread wasn't good and closer was kind of an older an overdone concept, bro. Seems you are writing yourself out here, dude. Been saying this... Overall, I usually think you bring good verses to the table but this week was probably one of the bad verses.
Muff
Opener was a solid personal. Orc style was dope. Trying to find yourself was good as well. The discussion references were soft but the closer was decent. Overall, one of your better verses. I liked the personal approach. Your personal references were good but could have landed harder if you delivered them a little cleaner. Your bars are a little stretched but still think you got the W here.
V/Muff - punches were more effective and he was more consistent.
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