Worst newb tourney verse? That's really something, bruh
Objective criticism's good, except when even he thinks you fucking suck
Could have flipped that a lot better, the concept was solid...but this was okay
we both like philly b-ball, but i'll still bring the torment
u entered the league w/ Noel but this loss'll be worse than a Sixer performance
This line was dope
dude can only score with the fattest & shittiest of hoes
any bitch that T-Bone got enough meat on her for like 50 of those
Seen T-bone lines, it was eh
n ya girl ain't satisfied. all she thinks about in bed is better men
she wants a change in Late Night... n I dont mean swapping Colbert for Letterman
Solid
i dont wanna talk to this loser any more, i fuckin had it
If I could put time in a bottle, I'd throw it in the ocean w/ a note saying 'I'm a giant faggot'
lol, but not that great
vs.
Stuck with the L on his forehead, death come from under you
You get dumb and dumber to, you won't get a W
nope
Get a rubber too, your heat bringing wont be lasting long
If you ever make it rain, I'll be checking for cats and dogs.
what?
Get pissed, beat it out to the tune of some astro-glide
Raising hands to women only tells them you need to go outside.
okay?
You dont fuck em, love em or trust em. You have sex with a tree
So fucking gay your ecstatic, and she feeds off my electricity.
first decent line
Failed your marriage proposal, girl like the ferraris I sell, b
This rookie with a kneedown make jabari look healthy.
nope
Sharp got this pretty easily. Time, you need to really work on tying concept together into punches...something like that electricity line. Keep working on it, I was quite impressed by Sharp here, I didnt think he was going to drop as well as he did. Props.
V/ Sharp
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