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Old 12-20-2014, 03:00 PM   #6
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for writin dumb shit, fuck it. i guess im stuck with punking this lame
Every1 knows i spit etherreal so ill leave your entire face covered in flames
kind of an obvious nameplay but decent attempt
claim u bust slugs,but since when is this prick on the street
we only hear about how big eclipsis when ur wording is obsolete
I love the idea but the word is ellipses. wrong word but that was a concept
ill catch him in church , rob his celly, leave him slammed in the dirt
and bring e.t. phone home so fast ud think i was an alien that landed on earth
lol alright, the part after 'so fast ud think' coulda been harder but this works
his wifes a nice chick but even that obese creature knows that this rappers sorta wack
everyday theres a newton when she steps on the scale that bitch could be the panthers quarterback
nice hit, a little wordy but good, had sting
day in day out u cross ur fingers u dont argue with her, so wud i fuck ur girl? hardly
id be worried about the next major conflict too cuz every step that mammoth takes could cause WW3
not really clear here


Two hand touch football vs girls must be viscious queer
The sacklegend? Way to swindle the Bills Bruce Smiths career
def didn't need 'the bills' but cool idea, not too much sting
Idiot seen D.Rose 'i can't breathe' shirt & damn he wasnt pleased
Shit brains quickly dropped him from his fantasy league
didn't really hit
4 shutout weeks & no votes = Losers compiled stats
Pffft Only close final 4 he's watched was Huskies vs Wildcats
ok
Milehighclub... You'll never be a fucking flight risk
Your such a massive hack, Sony is filing to indict bitch
dope
Hope this sweet potato has an appetite for brass fists
Even Assholes have to eat & this queers into CIA torture tactics
lol alright, feel like it coulda been harsher but good


fuck idk... this is close I think E's last two hit the hardest but were the only ones from his verse that hit while PSL had hte opener phone and newton. I give E the slight edge for better hits cause PSL's dont really hold up for me. better wording and he woulda had it

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