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Old 12-19-2014, 05:55 PM   #12
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I have to vote quickly but read each verse three times earlier. Either way, y'all had a great topic (and by far the best song on the album) and basically avoided it.

Arid: This was good and nostalgic and all that. The rhymes were strong. You didn't move past the baseline concept well enough to make it something more. You also didn't do much to relate to the topic.

NYCSPITZ: Your writing here, with the juxtaposed voices and such, was really great. But the topical correlation was really weak to me, even weaker than Arid's. But I think your writing allowed you to rise past him.

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