This was ok....
Arid felt like he just wanted to write a random freestyled verse
which is cool if you were going to make it into a little mixtape track
but when it came together here it seemed a bit forced for topic's sake
I felt if he didn't just use the beat as the stronger piece of his verse it would be smooth
NYC, this verse is something that I would have expected from you
a very nice flow with a grasp on your topic, I felt that you eased through this one
you kind of took the easy route out expecting your opponent to do less than you
either way it was a nice enough piece to win..
v/NYC, he had a stronger grasp on his topic
Arid did good, just not league worthy material this time around
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