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Old 04-12-2013, 11:40 AM   #7
Zen
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i like a girl with beautiful teeth
cuz it's more fulfilling when i knuckle-fuck 'em loose in her sleep
so my eyes are wide shut, there's nothing new here to see
NEVER has human been free. i'm writing just to loosen the leash,
so it's stupid to think that anyone of you could compete
"I do it for me" - if you buy that shit, here's twenty receipts

Nice drop...as always. Well worded lines and you made each word count which you have to do for a piece this short. And my only complaint is that this was too short lol. You had allot to work with here man. It was humorous and a bit dark at times you coulda went anywhere with this dead. Let me know when you drop again and I'll be sure to feed it.

Also if you could be so kind to feed my OM piece I'd be much obliged.
http://artofbattling.com/showthread....enLand-Part-II
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