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Old 04-12-2013, 11:20 AM   #3
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Nice drop. I definatly shoulda collabed on this shit because I write pieces like this ALL the time lol. But JW's opening stanza was the best part imo. It was a fast start and built momentum for the piece gracefully and I feel like Aesthetic didn't live up to that. No diss to Aesthetic every group needs a Tony Yayo lol. Jk your verse wasn't bad it just didn't live up to what JW just dropped. The third stanza by JW was once again quite powerful in just a few lines and NG picked up and carried it to the end quite well. A nice little collab here fellas. I do think JW and NG would collab very well together in the future since your styles are quite similar. As for Aesthetic I just didn't think you brought it here in this piece man it seemed rushed. Nice drop though fellas.

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