Thread: It ain't 99'
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Old 04-12-2013, 11:15 AM   #8
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Damn. A short little drop here but its jam packed full of deep content man. The flow was nice and your word choices were on point especially in the first few lines. Really enjoyed this shit:
I'm seeing lights to the left of me.. telepathy tries, intertwined w/ the message meaning times were protecting me.. it ain't 99'.. see it's why I'm objective, receptive, w/ measurable minds in the recipe blended in my breakfast for better times when my guests can eat, swine
^^The flow and the word choice set up this piece beautifully.
I've never read an OM drop from you before Strikta but this is good man. Keep droppin.
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