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Mr. J · 12-12-2014, 01:41 PM

I feel like the first half was from the heart
the second half almost outdid what I said bout the start
when you said 'you brighten up his day' that was hard
sometimes I feel like its hard to even decipher your bars
but...'when a guy say your beautiful' that was raw
'he attracted to your beauty' I was like OH MY GOD...
nicely done...

12-12-2014, 01:41 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I feel like the first half was from the heart the second half almost outdid what I said bout the start when you said 'you brighten up his day' that was hard sometimes I feel like its hard to even decipher your bars but...'when a guy say your beautiful' that was raw 'he attracted to your beauty' I was like OH MY GOD... nicely done... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you