[Mr. J]

This was a smooth piece, I didn't enjoy the build up to snake bite & hate night
hate night just seems like a random thing to put together at least in my opinion
the opening part of this verse was really well put together though and so was the ending
I think that the middle just took away from it a bit but the switch off was well done
after that little bump in the road you seemed to have a nice idea of how to finish
and you did that well, nice work my dude...