[Mr. J]

I thought this was really interesting the piece carried out very nicely
the flow of the piece was kept, and as it unfurled it showed your emotion
it seems like you tapped into your special area and wrote from the heart
I thought the beginning started off kind of slow, but it picked up eventually
"Hell's Plan" felt like a stretch to fit in there, but it still felt like a smooth piece
really felt like you held your own on this piece, don't know if its personal experience
or if it's just something you came up with on the fly, personal pieces are in a different spectrum
but you did a good job here, keep it up