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Old 04-11-2013, 09:48 PM   #5
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again, nice piece sir. well put together, stayed on the same scheme throughout and flowed effortlessly. didn't expect nothing less. how long does it take you to write something like this out of curiosity?

cuz it's more fulfilling when i knuckle-fuck 'em loose in her sleep
translucent as sheets, ghostface silhouette, a mutant physique

this was pretty dirty man.. really enjoyed these two lines


so my eyes are wide shut, there's nothing new here to see
NEVER has human been free. i'm writing just to loosen the leash,
so it's stupid to think that anyone of you could compete
"I do it for me" - if you buy that shit, here's twenty receipts

this was dope too,

pretty much everything from there out was fire except i didnt like the fuselage stretch but fuck it, who am i. anyways yea, keep puttin out dope shit. peace
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