arid this was pretty long but at least your lines were short and the story kept progressing. if you wrote anything like you voted you'd be hard to beat, lol.
this was a weird fucking story, highly original but also random as fuck. it was decent and definitely hit the topic.
story thanks for keeping ur shit short but i just really didn't get what you were going for here? the writing was pretty damn good, better than arid's, but i flat out didn't see the connection to the topic. that's probly my bad but i read ur verse multiple times and i just have to give this to arid. arid i think ur verse was very average but story went way to obscure this time which gave u the win. you will have to step it up to compete in this league and i think we're all wondering what your deal is, and what you're capable of.. especially based on ur very detailed voting..its quite strange to be honest..
vote:arid.
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