Soul- I have been around ur work from way back when. Let's just say a long time and I can tell u had this half way done... I'm guessing u thought deadline huh... but none the less even for what it is this was sheer delight with such the easiest for to perfection. Poetically written with the diction of a pure artist man. Yes it was short and it honestly ends abruptly but for what it's worth man it eclipsed and it still held a statement understood. Wish it was just a few more lines into it but damn this was a nice short verse.
NYC- bruh you had a complete sotry. Yes a longer verse which held tight to the understanding and the diction kept me intrigued thru out. At times I felt u slid a little off but u came right back on top of it and finished. Some grammatical errors but it's nothing that retracts from the work. Nice depth in detail half way thru.... sort of a struggle but u kept ur verse and made it whole. Nice drop bruh
Both did well and honestly that short verse could rival alot just felt it ended too fast in a sense. Nyc held his own and kept it at a pace where the detailing paid dividend. V/ NYC
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