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with the blood of every emcee i've defeated in a sea so crimson n infinite
i'ma plant the seed of evil n greed n i need your corpse so i could christen it
Was more of a boast than an actual punch, didnt really hit
but, u a burden.. so someone AliRT 'M cuz i'll insert-him lyricAli into a raw plot
this the end of Ali, dude's so frail he couldn't throw one punch so why not...
More or less a statment
break keys on a mercenary, this impersonate'n hater think'n opportunity's knock'n
this loser shouldn't be talkin, stay gagged up n stuffed in the closet ya locked in
Nothing really here either
i'm above u, hella like pavelow, adren got soldiers on payroll, one i know has already K.O'd-
you, so ya could take command of time n still not make it march to april, i know.. life's so cruel...
the march idea kind of got muddled with you taking different angles with it (soldiers/april) feel like this could've been a lot more effective
this elitist gon' grieve-this genius's skill cuz it's so deep its intravenous, u called me out think'n "i'll win this most likely"
but adren'll land shots like epinephrine if u wanna test-a-veteran then entice me, cuz i eat emcees but i don't like light meats
tbh i havent seen an eating line that didnt sound corny/played as fuck in awhile, didnt hit


no need for expos, they made me think you're using fairly dull ideas for your concepts. stay up



I'm a perpetually prolifically potential jampacked Soldier
Whose GENERAL ideas are to Overthrow this dictator with my pencil in my holster.
Simultaneously his mother cocoons my dick like a catterpillar before its bloomings over.
oh no
And when I say before its bloomings over
Is cause his mother currently has a face that looks like it got cremated within a toaster
She drips so much instead of a condom on my cock when I Fuck her I need a coaster.
the last line of this kind of hit
And in the chatbox Adren openly admitted to not utilising punchlines
That's like a sergeant openly
admitting he's afraid of the frontline
Which is befitting cuz Adrens shook of the action
He'd rather stay home trying moms scarves on
While father shouts at him and he screams back 'DADDY IT'S FASHION!'
lol wtf
And I might bust a couple jokes but believe I ain't playing though
In terms of bars adren got the lyrical substance of play-do
So when he puts up money to battle well that's just play-dough
hey, no.
In previous battles you proved you get KO'd against real Quality/Kwality
You versus me this shit is a horror scene
Only time this pussies grimey is when he stops to sneeze.
And when I'm finished leave this faggot as a chronic asthmatic as he struggles to breathe!
just like the eat thing this kind of concept almost always comes off as corny/played

okay... seems like you're doing most of your stuff with the actual substance of the punch in the last line, generally set up by just rhyming. in battles its a lot more effective to use something to set up the punchline (you'll notice most if not all of us use setup-punchline format) - think of it like wording a joke


I think that coaster line was the only thing that almost hit for me tbh so ali wins for that

v/ ali