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with the blood of every emcee i've defeated in a sea so crimson n infinite
i'ma plant the seed of evil n greed n i need your corpse so i could christen it

This is neither clever or insulting there is no concept - 0/5

but, u a burden.. so someone AliRT 'M cuz i'll insert-him lyricAli into a raw plot
this the end of Ali, dude's so frail he couldn't throw one punch so why not...

Statement, poorly worded, poor concept shit delivery 0.5/5*

break keys on a mercenary, this impersonate'n hater think'n opportunity's knock'n
this loser shouldn't be talkin, stay gagged up n stuffed in the closet ya locked in

Statement no punch 0/5

i'm above u, hella like pavelow, adren got soldiers on payroll, one i know has already K.O'd-
you, so ya could take command of time n still not make it march to april, i know.. life's so cruel...

Statement no punch 0/5

this elitist gon' grieve-this genius's skill cuz it's so deep its intravenous, u called me out think'n "i'll win this most likely"
but adren'll land shots like epinephrine if u wanna test-a-veteran then entice me, cuz i eat emcees but i don't like light meats

What the fuck - way too much filler and in that many lines I'd expect a punch -1/5*


expos:

* his register date is Mar 2013, it's april now..
* his user title is "Mercenary"
* he was asking how to do punchlines in the cbox
* nomad battled him and K.O'd him, we're in the same crew.
* he's a burden, i got nuff mentions just for this battle.

Too many expos that arnt even that great*


You total -0.5*
You have no grasp on concepts punches wording ... The list is long... Poor poor effort but nevermind what do we know at this site - we don't even have a shout box

I'm a perpetually prolifically potential jampacked Soldier
Whose GENERAL ideas are to Overthrow this dictator with my pencil in my holster.*
Simultaneously his mother cocoons my dick like a catterpillar before its bloomings over.

That's huge an other then a light attempt at concept which had no direction I saw nothing in this - an the multis were too forced - 0.5/5

And when I say before its bloomings over*
Is cause his mother currently has a face that looks like it got cremated within a toaster*
She drips so much instead of a condom on my cock when I Fuck her I need a coaster.

When i saw you repeated a line I stopped reading 0/5

And in the chatbox Adren openly admitted to not utilising punchlines
That's like a sergeant openly
admitting he's afraid of the frontline
Which is befitting cuz Adrens shook of the action
He'd rather stay home trying moms scarves on*
While father shouts at him and he screams back 'DADDY IT'S FASHION!'*

Considering the standard this battle is setting (lower then the offspring obey and He whose name shall not be spoken would make) this is ok I suppose but still poor an way too long - 1/5*

And I might bust a couple jokes but believe I ain't playing though
In terms of bars adren got the lyrical substance of play-do
So when he puts up money to battle well that's just play-dough*

No no no no no no 0/5

In previous battles you proved you get KO'd against real Quality/Kwality
You versus me this shit is a horror scene
Only time this pussies grimey is when he stops to sneeze.
And when I'm finished leave this faggot as a chronic asthmatic as he struggles to breathe!

Least there was a minor attempt at a workable concept at the end - urgh 0.5/5


Think that makes you 2 total from
Memory (it's too much filler for me to scroll back up)*

Considering I gave him a minus you won by default anyways you just had to be above 0,


You both need mad work but to be honest I can't see vengeance agreeing.*

Vote the less shit one*