[Zen]

Originally Posted by VENgeance

with the blood of every emcee i've defeated in a sea so crimson n infinite
i'ma plant the seed of evil n greed n i need your corpse so i could christen it
There's no punch here
but, u a burden.. so someone AliRT 'M cuz i'll insert-him lyricAli into a raw plot
this the end of Ali, dude's so frail he couldn't throw one punch so why not...
Why not what? I get it Ali has parkinson's and can't punch but why is why not there at the end? Idk.
break keys on a mercenary, this impersonate'n hater think'n opportunity's knock'n
this loser shouldn't be talkin, stay gagged up n stuffed in the closet ya locked in
No punch again.
i'm above u, hella like pavelow, adren got soldiers on payroll, one i know has already K.O'd-
you, so ya could take command of time n still not make it march to april, i know.. life's so cruel...
No punch....
this elitist gon' grieve-this genius's skill cuz it's so deep its intravenous, u called me out think'n "i'll win this most likely"
but adren'll land shots like epinephrine if u wanna test-a-veteran then entice me, cuz i eat emcees but i don't like light meats
Ok I guess.

Originally Posted by LyricAli

I'm a perpetually prolifically potential jampacked Soldier
Whose GENERAL ideas are to Overthrow this dictator with my pencil in my holster.
Simultaneously his mother cocoons my dick like a catterpillar before its bloomings over.
No punch.
And when I say before its bloomings over
Is cause his mother currently has a face that looks like it got cremated within a toaster
She drips so much instead of a condom on my cock when I Fuck her I need a coaster.
I don't even get this honestly. What does blooming over have to do with being cremated within a toaster?
And in the chatbox Adren openly admitted to not utilising punchlines
That's like a sergeant openly
admitting he's afraid of the frontline
Which is befitting cuz Adrens shook of the action
He'd rather stay home trying moms scarves on
While father shouts at him and he screams back 'DADDY IT'S FASHION!'
First off this is like 2 bars at least with an attempt at being funny at least and it kinda is but it's just not a hard hitting punch at all.
And I might bust a couple jokes but believe I ain't playing though
In terms of bars adren got the lyrical substance of play-do
So when he puts up money to battle well that's just play-dough
No.
In previous battles you proved you get KO'd against real Quality/Kwality
You versus me this shit is a horror scene
Only time this pussies grimey is when he stops to sneeze.
And when I'm finished leave this faggot as a chronic asthmatic as he struggles to breathe!

No.

Ok I wasn't trying to be a dick to you two at all just being honest. Vote ven