It was cool in content. Just dont really prefer the way you formatted this. Your rhyming style here was off for me... i know its there. I just coukdnt figure out what you were going for. You know what i mean? Whtlat im saYing iss..... im reading it out loud but it isnt flowing as smoothly as i wang it to and i can tell its there but im just reading it wrong and im really getting frustrated trying to find he flow you were using and now i quit
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