[Soulstice]

Arid - this worked as a braggadocio bit in parts. the last two lines were cool, there were some ok couplets, but it didn't really mean anything.

Copy - This was OK. Good description I guess, it was kind of vanilla. The end was alright as well. I thought of feed I recently gave you about your connotations not matching up with the readers and here was a good example of them matching up well. Winter being a frigid bitch, a cruel teacher.

v - copy for putting something together coherently. Both were ok.