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Glossy Finish Dick Lips · 12-01-2014, 09:28 AM

theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly
Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie

this was stale.

Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed
So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades"

same as your opener. I think you could have executed this with just a little more creativity and harshness, tbh.

Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply..
Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting

this was ok. but set up was filler, son simply? I think you could have used more of a relevent end rhyme.

I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude
Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you

didn't like this much.

Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam
So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram

this was ok.

your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth
Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out

I feel the same about this bar as I did w/ the take one for the team concept.

vs

I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean
You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine

eh, ok.

I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped
Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife

Lol, ok.

No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious
While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention

Self hype, cool tho.

All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest
Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it

eh, wasn't feelin' this one to much.

I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin
Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person

this was nice.

My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude
If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot

this was ok.

I think the 2nd dude got this. punches a tad bit more effective. 1st guy had some cool concepts but his executions were lazy which hurt his verse a lot. so with that being said...

v/2nd alias.

12-01-2014, 09:28 AM	#10
Glossy Finish Dick Lips Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Astoria, NY Posts: 1,417 Battle Record: 10-4 Rep Power: 0	theres no excuse for trashy. your style? it needs improving badly Your verses make us say "Wtf is this shit?" ..like Bags when he saw the preview 4 Annie this was stale. Bishops never the proper Wingman. Hes hideous n undeniably flayed So when friends tell you to "take one for the team" it means "sir plz dive on grenades" same as your opener. I think you could have executed this with just a little more creativity and harshness, tbh. Ull never gain proper employment..son,simply.. Closest you had to a PayDay that was 100 Grand u were eatin those candy bars in one sitting this was ok. but set up was filler, son simply? I think you could have used more of a relevent end rhyme. I approached w/ that iron outlike "Im taking your bitch"n Damn it thrilled dude Call you Diddy from Monsters Ball..youll be leavin the good pussy to the man who killed you didn't like this much. Ill beat the vag up. She loves the savagery fam So you can try to Hold the Fort Down..im still bringin wood to her walls like a battering ram this was ok. your a sucidal faggot. shut ur lid n ur mouth Yeah lifes a double edged sword. Dive on the side thats pointy bitch figure it out I feel the same about this bar as I did w/ the take one for the team concept. vs I’ll send fists your way & trust my hook is mean You’ll Catch such a beating it’ll make Beckham Jr’s look routine eh, ok. I set Records daily, this fuck isn’t awesome or hyped Last time Pancetta Record it involved Joe Metts w/ a fork & a knife Lol, ok. No one's Amused w/ ya verse..you're weak, pretentious While my writtens are such a Riot they make Ferguson look like a Peace convention Self hype, cool tho. All ya drops are Shit, no one ranks Pan the highest Iunno what’s worse. That name you picked or the fact all ya verses stand behind it eh, wasn't feelin' this one to much. I'm Grimy & Vile plus my punches give the worst hurtin Dog, Yucatán for years and still wouldn’t be considered a dirt person this was nice. My swings are fierce, vets swear I’m like Rocky dude If I connect, it’ll give you such a Black eye Darren Wilson’d prolly shoot this was ok. I think the 2nd dude got this. punches a tad bit more effective. 1st guy had some cool concepts but his executions were lazy which hurt his verse a lot. so with that being said... v/2nd alias.