[UnbornBuddha]

Arid, I honestly feel you could do a lot better. The way you speak throughout your posts seems to be that of a more seasoned writer. This wasn't bad, but it was very bland. I also did not comprehend how it had to do with the image. Perhaps, and most likely it is my ignorance, but nevertheless I did not see a connection. The rhymes were nothing too spectacular either. If this is really where you are at, read more of the writing of the other writers in this site, especially the topicalists. So you can take a more focused approach to the matter.
Copycat, yours had a very smooth flow, partly because of the rhyme schemes and such. That being said, I thought what you painted was a bit monochrome. You essentially described how Canada is cold, and the heart of Canadians to explore and go outside, even through the chilly cold. You could of gone further perhaps, and told a tale of exploration in the Artic, or of a man freezing to death. There was many more interesting angles you could have explored.

Due to a better technical display I will give this to Copycat.

Thank you.