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Old 11-30-2014, 11:50 PM   #9
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This was an honor to witness.

I really enjoyed both. I did not realize Zygote was mimicking NYC, until I read other's comments. If anything, I thought it was the opposite when I first read both. Reason being, is because NYC evoked some of the same language, and even chose the same words. Now, it could be a coincidence, but due to the rarity of some of those words I think not.
Zygote's piece is a lot cleaner, and more refined. Not to say NYC isn't. NYC emitted a more alchemical tone to it, for a lack of a better word. NYC had more details, but also quite longer. Some of the lines felt a bit drawn out, however I very much enjoyed it.

Yet, ZYgote piece is more epic. Though, both narratives have a mythos to them, NYC's even has a time frame to his. Zygote accomplishes a more climactic thrill. Although, I will blatantly state that NYC had some of the better couplets. I still felt more enticed by Zygote's approach, and the way he chosen to draw his canvass. I also think Zygote had a more closer to the picture approach, even describing some of the wizard, and the horse and such. NYC incorporated the theme, but Zygote went a little further.

An amazing bout. Vote: Zygote

Thank you both for the inspiration.

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