shits intense. and random. you've elevated to some next level weird type of atmosphere way up there where the rules do not apply. you're playing around with the whole idea of rhyming and flow, scheming..wordplay. everything. nobody is safe!! dat shit cray! don't have much to say to u other than that though cause it feels like u could EASILY write whatever u want to any style.. i just felt a free-nees in this.. and a not giving of any fucks. it was outta control. it was a fun adventure of reading some ridiculous shit. i enjoyed it... alot. i'm not sure i would love this typa style every time tho. but for what it was it was cool
some of the shit was over my head and took away from the overall experience cause it started out redic but then u said "kamehameha" and i was like wtf? also the negative 100003 .. other than that this was great, lol. post more i want to see what else u have
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