gotta remember to use my computer for these votes, phone lost my first breakdown...
Zygote, trippy. I loved the metaphysics. The character was solid and I got a sense of Merlin/Gandalf/Elminster epic wisdom and wry humor in him. A bit tongue in cheek with the disses. What strikes me on second read through is the imagery, and how the plot thickened in the right places.
NYCSPITZ, epic. Dark. I liked this for how you worded lines. There were awesome choices made in some very unique places, and the story was mysterious enough to help me over look the awkward phrasing here and there. Imagery and plot progression were great up til the end, where it felt like the potential consequences of an en-souled golem with a multi-sword attachment should have been explored. Abrupt ending.
Toughest choice so far. Hmm...
Zygote really captured my imagination and evoked nostalgia. The humor seemed more distracting than helpful. NYC had this old century charm, all his imagery sepia toned and scratchy. It was like watching a 60's horror adventure movie mixed with Cliff Hanger by Blackaliscious....
are draw's allowed?
UGH! ok, I'm gonna edge this one on a technical, to Zygote. It was the way he fleshed out the picture, stuck to the topic and elaborated for us the events it portrayed. NYC's verse wasn't inferior, it just maybe didn't make the best use of the pic.
Thank you both.
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