good match here. both writers came with very smooth verses, good vocab and technicality without being too complex or overly wordy. really well written verses by both. I felt that pent really said more in his verse and connected with the pic a little better. story your writing was right up there with pent but i thought that at some points you were kinda just rambling while all of pents lines had a purpose. this was close but my vote is for pent.
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