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Old 11-26-2014, 03:46 AM   #2
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This was interesting the paragraph style comes and goes
the formula for the structure is nice once you get the hang of it
I feel like it is mostly used to string words along to help build vocab
Anyway...after the first string you take an unexpected twist using less rhymes
Focusing more on well....yourself..which is cool but after te beginning. I thought I would see more
Unfortunately I didn't...but you hone your skill well when on track
keep writing
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