Zygote: Interesting and creative concept. Fucking paperclips man, makes me almost proud to be norwegian to read this shit. Either way, it was cool to read your take on the topic. Who would have thought something as innocent as paperclips was the initial threat that lead to our doom? I also like how the entire verse is an annual report made by this machine or whatever and how it wants to expand its production to the rest of the world. Well done.
Frank: You're telling a story about Larry Quilt, a drunken dude that grew up sowing shit behind the curtains of his mothers shop as a kid. A depressing story of child labor and abuse that led him to poverty. At least he know how to stay warm, right? Decent story, but I'd like more ''horror'' to it and more about the ''deadly threat to the human race'' rather than just reading a story about a dude. There needs to be something more in the works for me, it's a great story with dope imagery and storytelling but it's not on topic enough for me. (At least not the written part of the topic.)
MVGT: Zygote. A clever plot that I felt was more on topic than Franks verse. Dope battle.
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