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Old 11-25-2014, 08:08 PM   #2
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This was pretty smooth I like these pieces you do
there's a certain finesse to.your style that makes it worth the.read
I feel like the first half of the piece was slick as hell
then you get deeper into it after 'Vanitys tits' which was cool
the ending blends how feel at the moment & the edit works out to
this makes me really want to light one up though maybe I shall
then write something myself

nice work by the way...keep it up man
the Portlandian bikers line>>>>
always a hassle when in the area
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