Blanco, what happened bro? Your previous verses are wayyyyy better than this. Looks like you're takin tips from Muzzle. Only bar I thought had any potential here was the Million Man March...with that reworded it could've been dope.
E....Funeral homes and Mobile Home were kinda cool. Otherwise you had some cool concepts just worded awkwardly. Shake that rust off, homie!
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