[Mr. J]

This was cool, a lot of punchlines that were played
but regardless your flow was there. this is more cypher material
then again I can't complain much about that whole ordeal
you grasp onto what you know what makes for well crafted verses
Id leave up to date punchlines for a song more than a text verse
the more you play with words the more praise you'd get here
at least that's how I see it, maybe play in the cyphers and craft a verse there
that's how must work comes about if you try hard enough & stay focused
keep it up