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Old 11-21-2014, 08:17 AM   #8
Glossy Finish Dick Lips
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I'll twist ur wiggin fella. Trust that ur death'll be a travesty...
He'll catch a shot from the side so lethal, Kevin Martins pull up'll look like a master piece.


This was cool

This dude wacks off to that kardashian pic. His love life just can't get a break...
Bro my bitches either look like a Kimora Khloe, while it's an arm twister just to find you a date.


Concept there, delivery and execution lacked sting/harshness, tho.

I don't play games homie. My pimpin is world wide, no need to hate man...
While the only way u'll have a player image, is using the 2k face scan.


This was good.

Ya girl puss caught mad somersaults. I put that box in a hearse w/ tears...
The way she bounced on my wood, the balance beam'll be out the Olympics for years.


I like it but feel it could have been delivered/executed a bit harsher and/or better.

Lol, bro you get played by bitches. Retards like you are such a disgrace...
You talk to the hand so much, autism awareness might sponsor ur face.

Wasn't feelin' this one too much.


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You got no luck. Your life & sex game doesn't got meanin'
The last time odds hit was at a roulette table when he put his last dollar on even.


Ehh, ok'ish.

Not only an alias here but on Instagram, this creeps a dumb joke
In fact, the last time he posted a #tbt it was a verse me, Hensley or hush wrote.

"The last time" 2 bars in a row. A little redundant but the concept as a whole wasn't there, imo.

Ur a a fake here, a nobody and none of you might no him
Offline everything he does is real....housewives marathons, cross dress, and write poems.

Didn't like this one much.

At the bar any hoes that I pick to come home, want to
When odds are in your favor at the club he's wiping ur hands & sprayin cologne on you.

Nah.. Another old concept but you tied in a name play which imo idn't really do much, just fell flat for me.

This shits a hobby for me. I work, play, and got ten bitches
While your life's shit & ur idea of turning up is whenever your boyfriend's finished.

Nah.. Another pretty over done concept.

OVERALL: tyler's been out of the text game for a while and his rust was obvious. I actually expected to see more but it is what it is. Really struggled to find something worth quoting but even the name play attempts fell flat for me. Odd had a few jabs in his verse. Player image was good, but even that I've seen done a few times with the whole xbox shit, when that came out but you had some what of a decent flip on it and the setup actually helped. Your opener was decent, the Kimora line was a dope concept but the execution fell short, balance beam was decent and the closer wasn't good. All in all, I'll have to say Odd takes this with moore effctive bars and consistency. Tyler's rust was strong here and his punches weren't there for me.

Odd Ways: 0 Solid & 4 Potential
tyler: 0 Solid & 1 Potential

v/ Odd
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