Opener, Clayton, closer was LOTB. You stayed consistent throughout, nothing that was over the top just nice solid punches & the misses where still jabs. Good verse, feel you kind of held back here though.
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Biopic could've been dope feel it fell flat, infared could've been nice as well but wording wasn't harsh, Bill Cosby was a clean line, other then that you collapsed toward the end. You had 3 nice concepts but only really connected with one of them. Your wording is what's holding you back the most you could've taken this if the first two where cleaner & more direct.
Vote black guy
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