[Mike Wrecka]

aight quick vote sorry guys but better than nothing


insane battle


zygote- sick flow. good structure. hit the topic full on. I enjoyed it. got a little wordy here or there, in a sense of it flowed and didn't feel stretched just, you needed to give it a little room to breath. shit im out of breath just reading the verse. i understand it was the robot supercomputer speaking, but it gave it took away the personality and charm of the piece and i see that it was intentional but it made for a semi boring read tbh. but ya superior structure and advanced story telling was displayed here. i liked it. don't get me wrong. just tryin to be constructive.

frank- your storytelling was dope here. i thought it related to the topic perfectly. little shop of horrors, where the guy worked for his mother. it had a good flow but did get a tad basic and read a little like the night before Christmas in spots. that's the trap of writing a plot and carrying it along in rhyme form. its difficult. but i did like the descriptiveness and imagery here. and your piece had that charm that you always bring.

man tough battle to vote on. two very different verses. both brought the heat, i just enjoyed this one slightly more so

vote- frank

good battle guys thanks for the reads