Not going to vote because I'm completely unclear about BOTH bars, tbh.
Muff: After reading your like 5 times, it just comes off soft and non insultish at all. Ok, so a terrible rubber match like when he comes home with some magnums? I'm not seeing how this is insulting him? I mean the concept is there, I just think your route of execution fell flat for me.
Des: I like the whole concept. The Sim'll ease/Similes was good and clean but not sure what you meant by if the sim'll ease out you may have a better connection? If the sim card comes out, you have no reception. So this fell flat for me.
All in all both had dope concepts but both bars fell flat for me due to the route of executions. I think you guys had to much going on in the brain when trying to word your concepts that it fucked up the final product.
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