[big baby]

i couldnt even finish reading this.

wasnt bad

wasnt amazing.

you're a great writer. just, a few lines

were, a bit allegorical and akin to my reality

if you would have just said everything i think of on a daily basis this would be spooky, but what im trying to say is

some lines hit home.

cancer/capricorn
teacher
autism talks


read a bit more

chaka khan in speakers, nice lol

sometimes i think what most readers do is find a thin connection with you, the tiniest grasp possible and when you hit the nail on the head, sometimes, readers - when pertaining to their own wits, their own realities, they can make a connection with you -the author. an ordinary line, that iwouldve read that didnt have a connection to me can be super dope to the next person (generally what happens, but dont get me wrong i think you're a great writer) but some of these lines just hit home, in a metaphorical way, and maybe one of them, head on. it's human connections, and when you say them, we wished we had said them, because - well im not speaking for everybody who has liked something you say, but when it happened in this instance, i was already thinking about it, you just said what was on my mind. and it was just lovely to hear someone that doesnt have any clue what you're thinking about just connect with you. dope stuff. i would nominate, but based on other factors, i probably will decide not too. i am very strict with nominations, in any case. this was a stellar read. i didnt read it all yet, but my eyes skimmed over couplets that stood out to me. i wil read in its entirety later.