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Old 11-19-2014, 01:58 PM   #2
Mr. J
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This was a smooth piece from beginning to end
I really enjoy your word choices when it comes down to it
makes me want to take up smoking cigarettes again
insomnia and a mixture of wordplay would benefit me nicely
but you have a great control of how you handle things
nice work my dude, I'd elaborate more but I should be off here soon
consider this an obligated bump
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