I'll make this quick
Dozer, your verse seemed more thorough and more on topic then timeless'
which made for a better verse compared to his, your vibe came through clearer
and it made for an easy read, well both were easy but one has to win
Timeless, you had a smooth vibe and flow along with the verse...which is great
I think a little more work on your verse would have gave you the W
better luck next time
v/ Dove
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