CDM - I LOL'D A COUPLE OF TIMES.. A NORMAL GUY, GOT THROUGH SCHOOL, WORKED HIS WAY UP THE LADDER LIKE A DOUCHEBAG, BANGED A SECRETARY.. YOU WORM!!.. LOL. GOOD SHIT. SPERMICIDAL - TO ME, WAS A BIT OVER THE TOP WITH THE HUMOR. WHEN SOMETHING IS IRONIC, I GET A KICK OUT OF IT. WHEN A WORD IS USED IMPROPERLY AND I CAN'T TAKE MEANING FROM IT.. I'M USUALLY BOTHERED.
HERE, I STILL LAUGHED. SO.. WELL EXECUTED.
ONE OTHER POINT WAS THE .............. MY EYES KEPT BEING DRAWN TO IT, CAN'T VOTE AGAINST YOU FOR OCD BUT DAMN YOU ANYWAY -_- YOU SAID A LOT ABOUT RELIGION, AND AN AVERAGE JOES CAPABILITY TO FAIL BEFORE HE DIES OF THAT HEART ATTACK
SO I REALLY COMMEND YOU FOR THAT.
Split- ok so. i interpreted the entire piece as, understanding faith to the point it's used as a tool transforms a clergyman into God's in the future. like ancient egypt, with lasers.. in the matrix.
this is a trip..
ogent sensory pleasures adjacent. Heaven noblely exposed in rays of essence indefinite,
Run-on words expand on mental TVs, hopelessly indentured and separate,
Treasure stationed by cerebral extensions of rope, silver-spun band of Endless,
Sewed to every digital cloud in the cyclically wound Silvre(R)-Diskette SimMetric,
Life-everafter affixed. Equivocal septims. Drivel, grim and yet depthless.
this can be interpreted in many ways of course, but taken literally it's a little glimpse into a world.. in the future.. that @
zygote foresaw a couple weeks ago, and described it's creation.. well you went into it.
that just blew my fucking mind but anyway.
what is a revitalist?
this piece is a huge bit to chew on. but really, you created a new fucking world and i dig it.
i've spent too much time trying to chew on bits and pieces of it.. so i think you were being pointedly ambiguous.
If you were to pm me one or two line on any overall messages i didn't get- if there were any - i would be grateful.
/v - split. i got a kick out of your entire piece cdm. really , i think it was rad. i was just capping to be sarcastic.but you really did do a good job, and i was into every aspect of your verse. freal.
split just.. came too hard. too deep. rhymes out the yin yang, word choices like no tomorrow.. concepts within concepts on top of a meaty foundation.. well. it would have been difficult for my nerdy ass to vote against you split. i'm a sucker for futuristic speculation as far as technology or religion goes and you got them both in one. all i can really say is, thank you.